可不可以幫我睇下下面篇文章的文法有冇錯？？？？
I have two cats. The big one is call “big cat cat”, and it has a best friend
“small cat cat”. They are very naughty and silly. Sometimes, they play
together and sometimes they fight each other. “small cat cat” love play
with this ruler. And “big cat cat”’s fantastic toy is this sheep. They both
have a long tail, ”big cat cat” wants to catch its tail really, but it never do
that. Their favorite food is fish, and just fish, they never eat the other food, such
as rice etc. If we don’t give them fish to eat, they will get hungry all day.
When they were hungry, they will sleep, sleep and sleep again, just like winter
sleep. Every morning when I wake up, my cats sit in front of the room door and “mew” at me, just like saying “good morning” to me, that is their way of
greeting me. I love my cats, because they give me a fascinate time everyday.
英文文法問題.....可不可以幫我睇下下面篇文章的文法有冇錯
2010-09-18 8:51 pm
回答 (4)
2010-09-28 5:00 pm
✔ 最佳答案
Of course there are many grammatical errors, but I have no time now to point them out .
2010-10-04 11:25 am
對發問者的文章沒有進行任何修改的回答者, 竟然獲選票較多?
2010-09-18 10:31 pm
建議修改之處: I have two cats. The big one is call “big cat cat”, and it has a best friend “small cat cat”. They are very naughty and silly. Sometimes, they play together and sometimes they fight each other. “small cat cat” love play
with this ruler. And “big cat cat”’s fantastic toy is this sheep . They both
have a long tail, ”big cat cat” wants to catch its tail really, but it never do
that . Their favorite food is fish, and just fish, they never eat the other food, such as rice etc. If we don’t give them fish to eat, they will get hungry all day.
When they were hungry, they will sleep, sleep and sleep again, just like winter sleep . Every morning when I wake up, my cats sit in front of the room door and “mew” at me, just like saying “good morning” to me, that is their way of greeting me. I love my cats, because they give me a fascinate time everyday.
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修改:I have two cats. The big one is called “big cat cat”, and it has a best friend called “small cat cat”. They are very naughty and silly. Sometimes, they play together and sometimes they fight each other. “Small cat cat” love playing with the ruler, and “big cat cat”’s fantastic toy is the toy sheep. They both have a long tail, ”big cat cat” wants to catch its tail really, but it never succeeds . Their favorite food is fish, and just fish, they never eat other food, such as rice etc. If we don’t feed them with fish , they will be hungry all day. When they are hungry, they will sleep, sleep and sleep again, just like hibernation . Every morning when I wake up, they sit beside the room door and “mew” at me, just like saying “good morning” to me, that is their way of greeting me. I love my cats, because they give me a joyful time everyday.
可能仍有些少問題, 但係錯誤方面應該錯得比原先的小=]
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這篇文章程度大概小6-中1
★要注意verb form
★唔好直釋
★要注意part of speech正唔正確
希望可以幫到你^^
with this ruler. And “big cat cat”’s fantastic toy is this sheep . They both
have a long tail, ”big cat cat” wants to catch its tail really, but it never do
that . Their favorite food is fish, and just fish, they never eat the other food, such as rice etc. If we don’t give them fish to eat, they will get hungry all day.
When they were hungry, they will sleep, sleep and sleep again, just like winter sleep . Every morning when I wake up, my cats sit in front of the room door and “mew” at me, just like saying “good morning” to me, that is their way of greeting me. I love my cats, because they give me a fascinate time everyday.
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修改:I have two cats. The big one is called “big cat cat”, and it has a best friend called “small cat cat”. They are very naughty and silly. Sometimes, they play together and sometimes they fight each other. “Small cat cat” love playing with the ruler, and “big cat cat”’s fantastic toy is the toy sheep. They both have a long tail, ”big cat cat” wants to catch its tail really, but it never succeeds . Their favorite food is fish, and just fish, they never eat other food, such as rice etc. If we don’t feed them with fish , they will be hungry all day. When they are hungry, they will sleep, sleep and sleep again, just like hibernation . Every morning when I wake up, they sit beside the room door and “mew” at me, just like saying “good morning” to me, that is their way of greeting me. I love my cats, because they give me a joyful time everyday.
可能仍有些少問題, 但係錯誤方面應該錯得比原先的小=]
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這篇文章程度大概小6-中1
★要注意verb form
★唔好直釋
★要注意part of speech正唔正確
希望可以幫到你^^
參考: myself
2010-09-18 9:35 pm
有兩個貓。最大的一個是所謂的“大貓貓”，它有一個最好的朋友
“小貓咪貓”。他們非常頑皮和愚蠢的。有時，他們發揮
有時他們一起打對方。 “小貓咪貓”Love播放
這個統治者。和“大貓貓”的神奇玩具這是羊。他們都
有很長的尾巴，“大貓貓”要真正抓住它的尾巴，但它永遠不會做
的。他們最喜歡的食物是魚，魚和公正的，他們從來沒有吃其他食物，如
大米等，如果我們不給他們魚吃，他們會餓了一整天。
當他們餓了，他們會睡，睡眠和睡眠再次，就像冬天
睡眠。每天早晨當我醒來，我的貓坐在前面的房間門口，“咪咪”在我，就好像說“早上好”對我來說，這是他們的方式
迎接我。我愛我的貓，因為他們給我一個令人著迷的時間每天。
2010-09-18 13:37:34 補充：
good 作得好!! 我給了你中文你看一看有冇
“小貓咪貓”。他們非常頑皮和愚蠢的。有時，他們發揮
有時他們一起打對方。 “小貓咪貓”Love播放
這個統治者。和“大貓貓”的神奇玩具這是羊。他們都
有很長的尾巴，“大貓貓”要真正抓住它的尾巴，但它永遠不會做
的。他們最喜歡的食物是魚，魚和公正的，他們從來沒有吃其他食物，如
大米等，如果我們不給他們魚吃，他們會餓了一整天。
當他們餓了，他們會睡，睡眠和睡眠再次，就像冬天
睡眠。每天早晨當我醒來，我的貓坐在前面的房間門口，“咪咪”在我，就好像說“早上好”對我來說，這是他們的方式
迎接我。我愛我的貓，因為他們給我一個令人著迷的時間每天。
2010-09-18 13:37:34 補充：
good 作得好!! 我給了你中文你看一看有冇
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