請指出錯處!!!THKS!!!

內容可以重組有系統地表達：
There are three members in my family. My father is forty five years old. He is a structural engineer who works in a construction site office. My mother is forty years old and she is a housewife. I am a student. I study at xxx (name) school. I am nine years old. My father and mother work everyday to pay for my education.I love my father and mother very much.

"She works in my home."這句全錯，不是文法錯，是意思上。第一，mother works at home並不是指她是家庭主婦，而是她在家中辦她的生意/業務。第二，個home不是你的，所以my home並非英語會用的屬詞，因此只會用at home便了，因為嚴格來說個家是你父母的。

I like my father and mother亦不太合適。like是用來表達選擇性地喜歡的東西，對於父母而表達「愛」會比較合理。但可以like來表達你父母跟你做的活動。例如：I like to play football with my father.

There are three members in my family. My father is a structural* engineer. He works in a construction office. My mother is a housewife. She works in my home. I am a student. I study in the school. My father is forty five years old and my mother is forty years old. I am nine years old. My father and mother work every day. I like my father and mother very much.

*結構工程師應為 structural engineer, not structure.

'construction office' is ambiguous. Please consider:
(1) He works in the office of a construction company
(2) He works in a construction company
(3) He works in a construction site
(4) He works in the construction industry

Godfrey is right. It is structural engineer, not structure engineer.

To Rai Man and kwok ping:

是 STRUCTURAL ENGINEER, 不是 STRUCTURE ENGINEER

EVERY DAY 應該分開, 是兩個字.
I take a walk every day.

EVERYDAY 一個字是形容詞 (adjective) - normally before a noun
Please describe it in ordinary everyday English.

2010-09-16 02:14:56 補充：
Sorry Tai Man, I spell your name wrong. (Not Rai Man).

分成一句句,讓你容易點看.

There are three members in my family.
Myfather is a structure engineer.
He works in a construction office.
My mother is a housewife.
She works at home.
I am a student.
I study in school .
My father is forty-five years old and my mother is forty years old.
I am nine years old.
My father and mother work everyday.
I like my father and mother very much.