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這是小弟的家課,題目是:Most popular goods/products in Macao
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Macao is a dense population city and most population is Chinses.Chinese have a traditional thought is that clothes , food , residencece and travel are most important in our life and clothes is most essential at that four's.Therefore, there are many pirated clothes sneak into our life.
There are many popular sportswears' brand in Macao ,like Adidas,Nike,etc.Since that some crafty manufacturers want to catch this chance and begin to make the pirated sportswear.Most of those pirated goods stress on the shape in the original and the quality of those goods is often poor.The pirated goods are always cheaper than the original but the pirated goods are expensive than their same level goods.
Those big sportswears' companies have their own technique to make the products more suitable to the consumer and it is different for the piracy to have those advantage.Some illegal manufaturers want to make the piracy more similar to the originals so they change some cuting and break the quality to get the result.Therefore,if there are some costomers to wear those pirated goods,it might be easy to get hurt or make demage for our body.
It is had to understand why poeple would buy those pirated goods.It sounds to waste money to purchase the brand,not the products.I think some of us are misunderstanding our traditional thought.The clothes is most essential for us is it can protect ourselves and it is a kind of tool.It is not use to show.