請大家幫我看一看我的英文文法对不对

I think I am a little bit fat. (correct)But I am not satisfied with my face (because it) is easy to break out in pimples.Everyone said that I have a baby face so I look like a child always. (correct)(My) appearance is (mostly) inherited by my father, (including) hair, eyes and nose.I have black short hair.I always (tie) my hair in a ponytail to go to school.(I) have a high-bridged nose and a sharp chin.(My) nose is quite big and my chin (makes) me look fat.Despite of having an unattractive appearance, I (think) that having a healthy body and a good life are (more important) than (becoming) a beauty or not.