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我的成績一向也不(算)太好,
也是一個留級生,
但經過一年的努力後. 好像有(了變所)改變,
但是我(自已)亦覺得不(太)滿足. 所以我決定在來臨的(這)一年,成績(必定)可以突飛猛進,
要養成每天放學後努力溫習的(一個)好習慣;D,
即使不能有(全級)20名以內. 但我卻(希望變做到)(至變最)少(會)有(一些)進步(取消吧),
另外. 我希望自己的鋼琴技巧可以(會)愈來愈強勁,
每天練琴(可能變雖然)是困難的事. 但(至變最)少令我可以在琴試中取得良好的成績我已經(很變非常之)滿足了。
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My grades are not always good.
Is also a repeater.
But after a year of effort. Seems to have changed.
But I also feel satisfied. So I decided to come one year, results can be rapid.
After school every day efforts to develop good study habits; D
If not there are less than 20. But I thought I would at least get better.
Other. I wish I could be more strong piano skills.
Practicing every day may be difficult. But at least I can try to obtain a good piano performance I was very satisfied.
變了做
My grades are not always good,
Is also a repeater,
But after a year of effort. Seems to change
But I also do not think it met their own. So I decided to come this year, the result will be rapid,
Every day after school to develop a good habit to study; D,
If not a full class of 20 or less. But I have to do at least some progress, cancel it,
Other. I hope my piano skills can be more robust,
Although every day is difficult for the piano. But at least I can try to obtain a good piano performance I have very satisfied.
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