請高手幫檢查一下翻譯得貼不貼切，如要改正的地方請指出並說明~

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2010-08-28 1:06 am

如標題這是一篇雜誌上的文章我以自己的能力翻成中文

但不知道有沒有要改進的地方，如果有請直接指出，並附加說明相關用法及混淆的地方，謝謝! ^^Surf in the internet, take pictures, watchvideos, listen to music and stay in touch with your friends and families. Theseare some of the features that drive the iPhone popularity in countries. But how about using your iPhone to control a Parrot AR.Drone, a wifi helicopter with two cameras? Think of the gamesyou could play with that!瀏覽網路，拍照片，看影片，聽音樂以及和你的親朋好友連絡，這些都是一些讓IPhone流行於世界各地的商品特色。但是該如何運用你的iPhone去控制一個海盜AR.Drone,一台載有兩個相機的wifi直升機？想看看你會玩到那樣子的遊戲麼！How it worksThanks to its self-created WiFi, the AR.Drone canbe controlled by either an iPhone or an iPod Touch. Moving your iPhone or iPod Touch turns the quadricopterand guides it forward or backward. Direct it to go up or down with buttons on the iPhone or iPod touch. Do nothing and it will hover in place.他是怎麼運作的多虧它的自創WiFi,可以不須經由iPhone或iPod Touch控制AR.Drone。經由移動你的iPhone或iPod Touch去轉動和引導quadricopter往前或往後移動。用iPhone或iPod Touch上的按鈕操作它上升或下降。不做任何動作的話它則會在一個地方上下起伏。What it can doMost video games can be played while comfortably stead on your couch playing them outside would be out of question. Playing with the AR.Drone however, compels you to be actives. Take it outside, and raceothers around your neighborhood. Fight gigantic robots and aliens, or destroy other drone with the multiplayer mode. Finally a video game won’t make you a couch potato.它能做什麼玩大部分的電玩都是舒適地坐者或者躺在躺椅上。而在室外就不太可能了。但用AR.Drone來玩的話，卻迫使你要動起來。把它帶到室外和你的鄰居們一同競賽。和巨大的機器人與外星人打鬥，或者再多人連線模式摧毀其他的Drone(無人駕駛的飛艇機具)。到最後電玩遊戲不會讓你成為一個couch potato。

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book

2010-09-06 1:33 pm

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1.
Surf ......... and stay in touch with your friends
......
But how about using your iPhone to control
a Parrot AR.Drone , a helicopter
with two cameras?
瀏覽網路，拍照片，看影片，聽音樂...以及和你的親朋好友保持連絡，
..
這都是一些讓IPhone流行於世界各地的產品特色.
但是,
運用你的iPhone
~
去控制一個~法國Parrot公司製的AR.Drone搖控直升機,
~
是一種附有兩個攝影鏡頭的有wifi功能的直升機, 你覺得如何？
http://chinese.engadget.com/2010/01/13/parrot-ar-drone-hands-on-a-quadricopter-for-the-rest-of-us
Wi-Fi---
http://tw.dictionary.yahoo.com/search?ei=utf-8&fr=mini&p=WiFi -
2.
Thanks to its self-created WiFi,
the AR.Drone can be controlled by
e i ther an iPhone or an iPod Touch.
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多虧它的自創的WiFi功能,不論 iPhone或 iPod Touch皆可
控制AR.Drone.
...............
Do nothing and it will hover in place .
不做任何動作的話,它則會盤旋停滯在定點 .

What it can do ((肯定句))--
=它所能做的事情/範圍.
.-

3.
out of question.=毫無疑問的

out of the question =不可能
http://www.gept.com.tw/P_890508.htm
http://www.english.com.tw/modules/newbb/print.php?form=2&forum=11&topic_id=8205&post_id=33269

, .......and race others around your neighborhood
.... make you a couch potato.

然而玩AR.Drone的話.迫使你動起來.
把它帶到戶外,和你周遭的鄰居們一同競賽。
或,以多人連線模式摧毀其他的Drone(無人駕駛的飛艇機具)。
到最後,電玩遊戲都不會讓你變成為一個躺椅上的懶人http://tw.knowledge.yahoo.com/question/question?qid=1405101013618

2010-09-06 05:41:32 補充：
P..a....r.....r....o....t ...=鸚鵡.
P..i.....r.....a....t....e ..=海盜.
.
**out of question**.=毫無疑問的
.
out of the* question =不可能

2010-09-06 13:46:02 補充：
2.
either =(兩者之中)任一的

either or =只表示2者之一.

*either .A.. or .B..
不是..A.就是..B.;((只能二選一))
She is either drunk or mad. 她不是醉了就是瘋了.((二選一))

...............................the AR.Drone can be controlled by either an iPhone or an iPod Touch.
=多虧它的自創的WiFi功能 , AR.Drone可由iPhone或 iPod Touch二者任選一種來控制.

2010-09-06 22:21:48 補充：
Most video games 大部份的電玩遊戲
can be played可以被玩
while而 comfortably 舒適地
stead
取而代之
on your couch 在你的躺椅上玩
playing them outside would be out of question.

=可以玩大部份的電玩遊戲,而且既使不在你的躺椅上舒服地玩,
在戶外也毫無疑問的,可以很舒適地玩,

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