以下是一封寫比校長的自薦信, 請問文法有否應該修正的地方 or 可改善的地方, 我不想因為寫了這篇信反而自暴其短. 求英文好的朋友幫我修正一下, 以希望校長可感到我的真誠. 謝謝各位!
Dear Principal,
Please excuse me for this unexpected letter expressing the eagerness of mine for requesting a seat for my son/daughter in your reputed school.
We are XXX of parents. Our son was born on xxth Oct, 2009. On the school beginning day, his aged less than two years old so not qualified into the nursery synchronization, so hope that he can be get into a classes in the middle of the nursery when November 2011.(小兒於開學日未足兩歲故未能同步入學, 希望小兒能在2011年11月插班入讀nursery. )
We are very much impressed by the education offered by your reputed school which stressed a balanced and all-rounded development of one’s potential.
The school policy esteem of XXX Kindergarten Nursery, curricular and extra-curricular and moral education in keeping good. I have met your students many times in public places, they all acted humble and polite, sanguine with smile. Principal staff for you and a public education all are highly enthusiastic to nurture the British material is indeed fortunate society. I hope that the children lucky enough to enroll your school, lively and active children, if your school principals and teachers were enlightened, certainly can build a significant achievement.
I am confident, educated the children, in addition to school education, particularly the time at home, I promise, the future in terms of academic, moral aspects, it will certainly meet your school of teaching and learning and development, education, spacious children together, become a useful person .
Copies of my son’s certificates and testimonials are enclosed for your consideration.
Regards,
Yours truly,
XXXXXXXXXXX