As I am preparing for my upcoming ielts, I am practicing my writing technique. Can anyone help grade my essay posted on my xanga?
http://shanshan-wan.xanga.com/731086296/work-or-rest/
Many thanks
Help grade my ielts writing?
2010-08-03 9:22 am
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2010-08-03 9:29 am
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First of all, I would grade it a F. It's not long enough to be an essay, it has a lot of grammar issues. Your sentences don't make sense and it's unfocused. An essay should be between 3-5 pages with a thesis, 3 paragraphs and conclusion. I would re-write it.
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