英文求助!!搵錯處

1. ....? i did't (didn't)
2.studying for mine (me)
3.My school has (had)
4....I take (took) part...
5.......I am (was) in front
6.of the race,but I get (got) really tired in the last 150 metres.In the end,I only
7.finished fifth.I feel (felt) very disappointed.
8.For the 200-metre event,i didn't made (make) it to the final because i tripped
9.and fall (fell) in the semi-funal (final).I was really upset at first,but I tried my best
10.to forgot (forget) about it
11.The good news is that i win (won) the 100-metre final.It was
12.the last race so the stadium is (was) full.It felt great to win!

2010-08-01 19:48:50 補充：
2.studying for mine (me),but I think I do (did) Ok

1.[Do](did) you do well in your tests last week?i did't spend enough time
2.studying for mine,but I think I [do](did) Ok
3.My school [has](had) its Sports Day in Aberdeen yesterday.It was a lot of
4.fun and I [take](took) part in three events.
5.In the 400-metre final,I started really well.I [am](was) in front at the beginning
6.of the race,but I [get](got) really tired in the last 150 metres.In the end,I only
7.finished fifth.I [feel](felt) very disappointed.
8.For the 200-metre event,i didn't [made](make) it to the final because i tripped
9.and [fall](fell) in the semi-funal.I was really upset at first,but I tried my best
10.to [forgot](forget) about it
11.The good news is that i [win](won) the 100-metre final.It was
12.the last race so the stadium [is](was) full.It felt great to win!

1 Did you do well in your tests last week? I DIDN’T spend enough time
2.studying for mine, but I think I DID Ok
3.My school HAD its Sports Day in Aberdeen yesterday. It was a lot of
4.fun and I TOOK part in three events
5.In the 400-metre I started really well. I WAS in front at the beginning
6.of the race, but I GOT really tired in the last 150 metres. In the end, I only
7.finished fifth. I FELT very disappointed.
8.For the 200-metre event, I didn't MAKE it to the final because I tripped
9.and FELL in the semi-final. I was really upset at first ,but I tried my best
10.to FORGET about it
11.The good news is that i WON the 100-metre final. It was
12.the last race so the stadium WAS full. I felt great to win!

Grammatical mistakes (tense) in every line.
Besides that, there are other mistakes.
(1) The pronoun “I” should be in capital letter.
(2) In line 9, “semi-funal” should be spelt as semi-final.
(3) In last line 12, “It felt great to win!” should be “I felt great to win!”

2010-08-02 03:42:24 補充：
The correction is in capital letter for you to see. It does not mean that the word has to be in capital letter in the essay.

2.studying for mine,but I think I do(would) Ok
3.My school has(had) its Sports Day in Aberdeen yesterday.It was a lot of
4.fun and I take(took) part in three events.
5.In the 400-metre final,I started really well.I am in front at(of) the beginning
6.of the race,but I get(got) really tired in the last 150 metres.In the end,I only
7.finished fifth.I feel(felt) very disappointed.
8.For the 200-metre event,i didn't made(make) it to the final because i tripped
9.and fall(fell) in the semi-funal.I was really upset at first,but I tried my best
10.to forgot(forget) about it
11.The good news is that i win(won) the 100-metre final.It was
12.the last race so the stadium is(was) full.It felt great to win!

2010-08-01 19:56:21 補充：
可能会错......

line3 has turn into had
line4 take turn into took
line5 am turn into was

2010-08-01 19:40:09 補充：
line6 get turn into got
line7feel turn into felt

2010-08-01 19:42:28 補充：
line8 made turn into make
line9 fall turn into fell

2010-08-01 19:47:47 補充：
line10 forgot turn into forget
line11 win turn into won
line12 is turn into was
line1 the first word is Did
line2 do turn into did