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The main characters in this story are Mr. Hoppy, Mrs Silver and tortoises.The story talk about Mr.Hoppy has always been a lonely man after retiring from his job who live alone in a small flat. Mr.Hoppy 's second love was a secret he kept to himself that he was in love with his upstairs neighbour Mrs silver for many years. But he was too shy to disclose his love . And he knew that Mrs Silver loved her tortoises very much. However, he tried to talk with Mrs Silver and knew she was unhappy about her c was small.
Because she wanted her tortoises can grow to very large and then she sat on tortoises . So he had an idea.
I don't like this story because Mr. Hopppy is dishonest . He said he had good ideal to help the tortoises to grow up . In fact , every day Mr. Hoppy got a new tortoise from his balcony so Mrs. Silver would think that her tortoises was growing . I thought he will tell the truth to Mrs silver . But he didn't do it . In the end ,Mr. Hoppy and Mrs. Silver got married . I think Mr Hoppy should talk the truth and apologize . Because Mrs silver may be know the truth and I think everyone should be honest. It is not good behaviour for everyone to learn. It is possible to make children who misunderstand to lie is correct . And I think the ending is common and not exciting .
I don't like Mr Hoppy. Because he was timid . He love Mrs silver many years , but he was too shy to disclose his love and was afaid for she will refuse . If I were he , I would talk my love to Mrs silver .
He can't lose time . Because he was old and not had many time to live . However , fanily he was brave for he stared to run after Mrs silver . Although the ideal was not good . And I appreciate that he was heartfelt
to love Mr silver .
To sum up , although I don't like the main character Mr Hoppy and the end . I had a good laugh every time when reading the book. From the name of the book, you can see that the author really had a good sense of humor.