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noel_xo

2010-07-26 5:19 am

please make this paragraph stronger and smoother. It is a conclusion for an anthology

The songs [Anytime you need a friend, Wonderful Tonight, Love the way you lie, and we’re family], 2 movies [My sister’s keeper and Toy Story 3], and the novel [The Time Traveler’s Wife] reflect people’s view in today’s society towards the 3 kinds of relationships (romance, family, and friend) are rather thin. Their selfishness and lack of empathy and responsibility to others create a lot of society problems, like domestic abuse and suicide. To bring out this issue, the photograph [City Relationships] asks audiences to take notification of it by using the rail road as an example saying everyone is connected to each other. Finally, the wedding ring demonstrates the methods of maintaining a good relationship. From these examples, one can see the impact of relationships on how they affect one another and what can one contribute to a successful relationship to make the society a better place for everyone to live in.

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2010-07-26 5:35 am

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In summary, there are numerous contemporary examples in literature and film media of the three primary types of relationships: romance, family and friendship. Within character developments in such pieces as the novel The Time Traveler's Wife, and the movies My Sister's Keeper and Toy Story 3, we are shown traits of human selfishness, lack of empathy and other behaviors that are abusive that can create significant societal problems. On balance, there are also examples in such documents are the photograph [City Relationship] that highlight a theme of human connection; and in traditional symbols still respected today such as a wedding ring that when love and friendship are respected, they contribute to successful relationships that will also strengthen our societies.

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