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2010-07-18 11:58 pm
毎一行有一個錯處/要加字/唔洗加 or 改 任何野(好少)!!
Today, the Coca-Cola Company is making huge profits 1.____
by sell about 800 million drinks per day around the world.But 2.___
interestingly, the first year that Coca-cola was in the market, 3.___
only about nine servings were sold everyday. 4.___
Total sales for the first year were US$50, 5.___
while it cost John Pemberton US$73.96 to advertisement. 6.___
So,the Coca-Cola business in th first year suffered a lose. 7.___

Readind Coca-Cola may make you want to drink some.8.___
before drink it, however, think about this: 9.___
Coca-Cola contains phosphoric acid,which can lead decay 10.___
of tooths and interfere with digestion.Moreover, 11.___
a can of Coca-Cola contains about nine teaspoon of sugar; 12.____
consuming too much sugar can cause weigh gain 13.___
and another health problems. 14.___

You may think that someone would have to crazy 15.___
to put nine teaspoons of sugar in his tea, 16.___
but you consuming the same amount of sugar 17.___
when you drink a can Coca-Cola! 18.___

回答 (3)

2010-07-19 11:50 pm
003 Tiffany答得很好。
唯一6.我會用on advertisement.
另外16.我認為in your tea沒有錯,反而是to put應該改為putting連接上句的would ..be..crazy而不是用infinite.因為是表達一個crazy(癲/傻)「情況」而不是「動作」
2010-07-19 3:16 am
1. has made
2. selling
3. it's the first year
4. selling only about nine servings every day( Note : every day is an adverb but everday is an adjective)
5. was
6. in advertisement
7.loss
8. delete "Reading" and add " some more"
9. drinking
10. decaying
11. teeth
12. teaspoons of sugar/teaspoonfuls of sugar
13. put on weight (增加體重)
14. problem
15 be crazy(adj.)
16. into
17. are still consuming
18. a can of

2010-07-18 19:24:17 補充:
correction : 3. in the first year ..... 4. every day

2010-07-24 09:50:00 補充:
1. Coca-Cola Company is making huge profits ( wrong)
5. Total sales in the first year were US$50 (wrong)
9. before you drink it, however, think about it (wrong)
10. , which can lead to decay(wrong) of teeth
14. other health problems (wrong)
2010-07-19 12:54 am
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