各位英文高人小女子有D關於作文既問題想問下?快D點入泥睇下啦

2010-07-14 11:10 pm
Dear:各位英文高人

題目:Susan is writing about an accident that happened last week.
You are Susan.Write about 70 words.Ues the following pictures and ideas for your composition.

1.有兩個女仔同一個男仔係到打籃球

2.男仔打左個籃球落窗到,D玻璃碎左

3.兩個女仔好怕禁坐係到,個男仔好怕禁走左


~ what were you doing with your friends?
~ What was the accident?
~ How did you and the others feel?
~ Wtah did the boy do?
~ How happened in the end?


如果各位英文高人肯幫小女子,小女子感激不盡,沒齒難忘!

小女子親筆上

回答 (2)

2010-07-15 12:48 am
✔ 最佳答案
Last week, my friend and I met a boy at the school basketball court and he invited us to join him. So we played two-on-one.

After about fifteen mintues of play, the boy was very frustrated because he hardly got the ball from my friend, who was in the school's girl basketball team. As he got the ball from me during a bad pass. He tried to shoot the hoop from a distance and missed. The ball went straight pass the end of the court and shot through the window of the main hall.

I was stunted and fell on my knees. My friend rushed to hold me and we sat on the ground to catch our breath. The boy, on the other hand, saw the broken glass falling down and fled.

The school care taker came and we had to go to the principal's office to tell how this accident happened. Fortunately, we were not being punished. And we never told anyone who the boy was.


這是一個怪題目,你是Susan(任何名字)是無法在文章中出現的。除了作為簽名認證這報告。

看來要用70字寫都好困難,這裏應該有多。

很希望見到你那感激不盡的樣子是何模樣!
2010-07-15 5:48 am
Last week, Hins, Mary and I were playing basketball near the windows. We were extremely exciting because of the same hobbies. Suddenly, a window was broken by Hins. We couldn't imagined that kind of things will happen dramatically during the wonderful time. While Mary and I were sitting in the floor with a scare mood, Hins ran away! In a few minute, a man who looked angry came towards us. He misunderstood that the window was broken by us and asked us for the compensation. Fortunately, a security who knew the fact came to explain it to the man. The man apologized to us immediately.


好多時D作文話寫ABOUT(xx)字 都可以寫多D=)



2010-07-14 21:50:45 補充:
We couldn't imagined that kind of things will happen dramatically during the wonderful time
係imagine.
冇d,唔係past tense,係imagine.
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