Pls help me to correct

Christine

2010-07-13 6:49 am

請問可否幫我看看以下句子有沒有問題？grammer....

1. I'm gald to receive all brithday best wishes from my friends, especially old schoolmates.
2. I regret to hearing from superior that I need to completed all sales reports on Monday, so I should work within weekend.
3. Today is my brithday, my honey bring me to enjoy tasty thai food, we ordered a lot of dishes, all taste of food are unexpected good.
4. World cup will end after the final match to be finished at night, an enthusiast about fans will be little by lettle falling.
5. My nuncle and aunt come from China today, their hair become white, their face was seamed with wrinkles, their hands were rough, I'm afraid I be them in the coming future.

Thank so much!

回答 (1)

Wilson C.

2010-07-13 7:16 am

✔ 最佳答案

1. I'm glad to receive all the best birthday wishes from my
friends, particularly old schoolmates.

2. I regret to hear from superior that I need to complete all sales
reports on Monday. So, I have to work at this weekend.

3. Today is my birthday. My honey enjoys tasty Thai food with
me. We ordered a lot of dishes which taste good.

4. World Cup will end after the final match going to be finished
at night. Passionate fans will be disappointed.

5. My uncle and aunt visited China today. Their hair was white.
Furthermore,there were few wrinkles on their faces and their hands
were rough. I'm afraid that I will look like them in the future.

To be frank,some sentences are quite confusing in meaning.
So,I change them a little bit based on my knowledge and contextualization.

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