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The best advice I have ever received

I am very scared of speaking in English. If I have to do presentation in English, my face become red and I suddenly become speechless. even my mouth open but no sound to speak out. Fortunately I have heard about an advice - for speaking english - it says broken english is better than no english. “Speaks in broken phrases is better than silence”.

My ability to speak in English improves everyday. Everyday my english in speaking is improving, I spoke out loud english when I was reading or watching TV in english program. I have tried to speak as in the TV programs saying. Facing foreign people who speak English, I have tried my best to talk to foreigners even I am not good enough. “Speaks in broken phrases is better than silence” - I remind myself when I am scared.
I believe that if I keep practicing English everyday, I will get better performance and be able to speak more naturally and clearly.
If you want to improve your spoken English, remember - “Speaks in broken phrases is better than silence”.

The best advice I have received
I am very scared to speak in English.Whenever I need to speak in English to the public for presentation,my face becomes red and that renders me speechless. Fortunately, I receive an advice of speaking English from my teacher which tells
me that broken English is better than no English.

Since then, my English improves every day that I can speak out English while I am reading. Also, when I watch English programs, I try hard to read those subtitles. Facing foreigners who speak in Engish,I endeavour to chat with them even if my pronounciation is not good and feel dreadful ,because broken English is better than no English.

I believe that keeping communicating in English every day,I can speak fluently, naturally and more clearly.

If you want to speak well in English, remember that broken Engish is better than no
English.

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You have to remember that "I" and "English" must be written in capital letter .

Please add more details to elaborate your passage since that makes it more realistic.

This was the best advice I had ever received

I was very scared to speak english,if I need to speak english in public for presentation, my face will become red and I can't speak because of afraid. Fortunately, I heard an advice for speaking english, it says that broken english is better than nothing.

Everyday my english speaking is improving! I try to speak english when I am readin-g. Also ,when I watch english TV programme, I would try to speak what the programme just said. Sometimes facing foreign people who speaks engish,I would try my b-est to talk with them even my speaking is not good. Broken english is better than not-hing, I would remember this to myself when I feel scared to speak english.

I believe to myself that I am going to speak english everyday.I will become much bett-er,don't be scared, more relax and speak more clearly.

If you want to be good speaking in english, just remember broken engish is better than nothing.


Hope that can help you!