Dear all,
Please proofreading the following sentence. Thanks a lot!
Moreover, Mrs. Svieta taught us how to play the Mongolian waltz in the Gobi Desert, it was such a pleasurable moment that I would / will never forget.
URGENT-Eng Proofreading
2010-06-28 7:49 pm
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2010-06-28 11:04 pm
✔ 最佳答案
Moreover, Mrs. Svieta taught us how to play the Mongolian waltzin the Gobi Desert. It was such a pleasurable moment that I would never forget.Notes:
1) 兩句句子如無連接詞, 唔好只用COMMA駁埋. 所以第二句改為開新句.
2) 第二句裡, 因前面已用was, 後面應用would (大家都係past tense)
參考: 我係英文老師
2010-06-29 1:55 pm
1. (dance) the Mongolian (W)altz in the Gobi Desert.
2. It , I would
2. It , I would
2010-06-28 9:44 pm
OK. Almost perfectly written.
Moreover, Mrs. Svieta taught us how to do the Mongolian waltz in the Gobi Desert, it was such a pleasurable moment that I would never forget.
Moreover, Mrs. Svieta taught us how to do the Mongolian waltz in the Gobi Desert, it was such a pleasurable moment that I would never forget.
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