一些英文寫作;希望各英文高手可以改正.

很欣賞你的努力
先講出你原句意思上跟你中文(想表達)意思的出入(錯處)，然後改寫英文句子給你參考。

I have a friend called wing.I met her in the church which one i used to go to.
我有一個朋友叫wing.我在我從前去的教會認識她的.

I have a friend and her name is Wing. I met her from the Church I go to.


You need to study more hard otherwise you will be to retain a student in the same grade for another year.
你需要更努力學習否則你要留住一位同學跟你一同留級.

You need to study harder, otherwise you will remain in the same grade for another year.

There is a supermarket under the flat i live,sometime i will buy some drinks in there.
在我家底下有一間超市,有時我會在它裡面 買點飲品.

There is a supermarket at the Ground Floor of where I live. I somethimes will buy drinks from there.

i have a friend named Wing. I meet her at the church I attend.

you need to study harder or you will repeat 5th (sub what grade) grade again next year.

I sometimes buy beverages from the supermarket downstair.

第1句:如果你冇CHINESE MEANING,我一定唔明.
I have a friend who called wing.I usually meet her in the church.
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2010-06-27 21:38:35 補充：
which one i uesed to go to(可以唔要,因為一定係你成日去的)

2010-06-27 21:42:57 補充：
You should study more otherwise you will stay in this level.

2010-06-27 21:45:48 補充：
There is a supermarket which is below my flat,I sometimes buy drinks
there.