請幫我修改我的信的文法及錯誤之處.因為是給外國朋友看的!
To Mr.Sallo,
hello~
are you busy now?my mother told me you had sent some photo to us but i found that i cannot open it.maybe there are some wrong in geogle but i think you can show us in the next time when you go to hongkong(will you have?)
well,i have a good news (just for me..haha)my exam were all pass and in some exam,i got a highest mark in my class!
i am going tp plain my summer holiday.my mother said that we may have a trip in holland.i hope it will be ture(I like the food in holland very much!)
i hope you and your partner all be fine in holland.have a nice day!
christina
請幫我修改我的信的文法及錯誤之處(英文的)
2010-06-26 5:45 am
回答 (2)
2010-06-26 8:31 pm
不太了解你的信的處境，如果是e-mail還可以用how are you now和have a nice day.但如果是傳統的信便要小心避免這些即時狀況的說話.
To Mr.Sallo,
Hello!, How are you? Are you busy now?
My mother told me you had sent some photos to us but I am not able to open them. Maybe there is something wrong in google but I think you can show us next time you come to Hongkong. You'll come agiant, won't you? [注意香港是你所在的地方，所以是對他說「來」。
I have a good news that I have passed all my exams and in some subject I got the highest mark in my class! [Note: THE ...-EST這是最的寫法一定用the的]
My mother said we may take a trip to Holland during my summer holiday. I hope it will come ture. I like the food of Holland very much! [注意句子的分段]
I hope you and your partner are fine and have a nice day!
Christina
To Mr.Sallo,
Hello!, How are you? Are you busy now?
My mother told me you had sent some photos to us but I am not able to open them. Maybe there is something wrong in google but I think you can show us next time you come to Hongkong. You'll come agiant, won't you? [注意香港是你所在的地方，所以是對他說「來」。
I have a good news that I have passed all my exams and in some subject I got the highest mark in my class! [Note: THE ...-EST這是最的寫法一定用the的]
My mother said we may take a trip to Holland during my summer holiday. I hope it will come ture. I like the food of Holland very much! [注意句子的分段]
I hope you and your partner are fine and have a nice day!
Christina
2010-06-26 2:00 pm
Hello Sallo,
hope you are well (or how are you?) My mum said you've sent some photos over but I don't seem to be able to open them. Would you mind showing us how to do it next time when you are here please?
I have some good news for you - I passed all my exam and I even managed to get the highest marks in xxx (subjects)!
me and my mother are planning a holiday in Holland. I hope it's going to happen, I really look forward to going there, the food is really nice!
Hope you and your partner are keeping well in Holland. Take care and have a nice day.
Christina.
hope you are well (or how are you?) My mum said you've sent some photos over but I don't seem to be able to open them. Would you mind showing us how to do it next time when you are here please?
I have some good news for you - I passed all my exam and I even managed to get the highest marks in xxx (subjects)!
me and my mother are planning a holiday in Holland. I hope it's going to happen, I really look forward to going there, the food is really nice!
Hope you and your partner are keeping well in Holland. Take care and have a nice day.
Christina.
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