以下Ｅ兩句有乜問題？？（急！關乎生死~)
1))` The cause of air pollution is factories,power plants and heavy traffic give out
so much smoke.
2))` We can donate our money to the charities to help the people in need.
英文問題!急急急急急！唔該！（急！關乎生死~)
2010-06-25 3:15 am
回答 (3)
2010-06-25 4:22 am
✔ 最佳答案
1. Word order + Lack of enogh conjunctionIt should be:
Factories, power plants and heavy traffic are the causes of pollutions
because they give off so much smoke.
2. Redundance
It should be:
We can donate money to the charities to help people in need.
參考: me
2010-06-26 5:45 am
2010-06-25 6:29 pm
For Q.2, please refer to Wilson's answer.
For Q.1, it should be rephrased as:
One of the causes of air pollution is smoke emitted from factories, power plants and heavy traffic.
For Q.1, it should be rephrased as:
One of the causes of air pollution is smoke emitted from factories, power plants and heavy traffic.
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