想譯做英文...謝謝 ~

Shan, 你本身的翻譯其實十分好（比眾多答案更好)。輕輕改一下就可以了。

We have checked with the bank and they advised that the appointment .was. so full recently. .Any. appointment from now can only be made .until. the end of June. Please advise us another .date. so that we can arrange for you.

就算是原文，一點也不怪。反而其他答案就真是”怪怪地“。

We had inquired with the bank about your concern, but the appointment was so full that the Bank Manager couldn’t arrange for opening an account. The next available date will be the end of this month. Please provide us with an appointment date, so that we can make the arrangements.

"Hello! We have checked with the bank, their recent appointment schedule is very full, so the bank manager is unable to give you an appointment tomorrow for account opening. The earliest appointment slot will be towards the end of the month, please give me a date so that we can arrange for you."

2010-06-15 07:38:25 補充：
Oops! "please give ME a date" should read "please give US a date"

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再用它的譒譯功能,
你好,我們已經跟銀行查詢過了,因為最近的預約很滿,所以明天約不到銀行經理替你們開戶... 新的預約最快要到月尾才有位,請提供另一個日期給我們以作安排...
譒譯如下
Hello, we have had with the bank check, since the recent appointment is over, so tomorrow, not the bank manager about opening for you ... the new appointment up to the end of the month only place, please provide us with another date to make arrangements ...




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We have checked with the bank and they advised that the appointment is so full recently. All appointment from now can only be made up to the end of June. Please advise us another day so that we can arrange for you.
便會是
我們已經與銀行核對，他們表示，最近任命是充滿。所有委任由現在只可到6月底。另一天，請告知我們，以便我們可以為您安排。

希望幫到你!(^(00)^)