一封信睇下譯得啱唔啱,仲有一個發問都係譯英(共30點)

對不起要說句：大部份都唔啱。首先提吓你一些重要字眼留意：

球類比賽是match
只有跑步的比賽才是race
superb是好叻(超卓)咁解，唔係超級，否則所有的supermarket便會是superbmarket.
小學生都識already是perfect tense.
see是看見(睇到)，watch是觀看(睇)
國家隊是national team不是country team.
小學生都學了in 2010(year), in June(month), on Friday(day), at home啦!
fall out是甚麼意思？散隊(軍隊步操口號) - 你原文是「擊敗」beaten
appreciate意思是多謝/感謝，原文是「欣賞」，用愛慕或佩服的英文字意思會好些。
你是在國家隊上不可抹殺其成就的15球員號- 這句完全沒有句法，意思是15號這個號碼是好有成就所以不可在國家隊中除去。希望是你想講的，但我懷疑你是想說「你這個15號球員在國家隊中的成就是不可抹殺的」
go to是「去」，但你寫這信是問人會否「來」hk跟你見，你是作者(地點是hk)，所以是come to hk. 小學生都應該識問問題的verb是要前置。

以下是更正，只把意思更正，當中有那些應該用不同的tense請你自行修改(太多字要抹去你原文中文)：

Hello, I am your super fan from Hong Kong.
I’ve seen your match for eight years already! I think you're the best!
You are so good at spike, serve, dig and all these skills! [I trust you’re research that spike, serve and dig are correct terms]
Actually, when you said you are going to change to play beach volleyball before, I really want cry!
If you really go to play beach volleyball, I will not be able to see you,
It is because such matches are rarely broadcast on TV in Hong Kong.
As you play beach volleyball, I will give up watching any volleyball matches.
But I really didn’t expect you returned to the national team in 2007, I think you have matured all around! You have beaten teams from China, Cuba, and Italy to get the silver medal and been awarded the Best Marker [I trust the Best Marker is the correct term but I doubt it – I think it is the Most Scored Player.] in the Olympics.
You are a hero in the heart of all your fans! You're the best sportsman.
I really admire you! You're the best!
You, No. 15 of the national team, have had the achievement that no one can denial.
In 2010, for the Champion of Asian Sr. Women's Volleyball Championship, will you come to Hong Kong?
I want to see you and take photos with you.
Anyway, I hope you like this present, it's not a very important item, but this present represents my heart and took time to finish.
I hope you can be the best you can be, I will support you wholeheartedly anytime(forever).

Hello, I come frome Hong Kong. Also, I'm your fans.
I started watching your race eight years ago! I think you're the best player!
It is because your spiking, serving and digging skill are very extremely excellent!
Moreover, when you said that you would play volleyball at the beach, i really want cry!
if you really go to play volleyball at the beach, i can not see you anymore as
Hong Kong seldom has beach volleyball to broadcast !
As a result, you have changed to play beach volleyball.
Therefore,i will never see you playing volleyball race anymore.

But i really cant estimate you would back to the country team in 2007, i think you are maturity ! Your team has beat China, Cuba, Italy team and get the Champion.

You are the hero of the fans ! You're the best sportsman.
i really appreciate you! you're the best!
you are very important in you team---No.15.

In 2010, will you go hong kong and take part in the Champion of Asian Sr. Women's Volleyball Championship?
I hope I can see you and take photos with you.
Lastly, i hope you will like this present. Although it is not very expensive,
it take me i lot of time to make it.
i hope you can try your best , i will support you at everytime!!!

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