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Have you ever been to Japan ? No ? Well, but I have. Last summer holiday
I eagerly asked my mum, " Can I go to Japan ?" OK, we can go together
next week.", my mum replied. I was so excited that I couldn't sleep the night before our trip ; as I had always longed for a trip to visit Tokyo
since the age of seven.
After we got off the plane, we went to the hotel, which was very beautiful, right away to unload our luggage. We then went to Tokyo Tower. It was really enormous and amazing. We went to the top and I grasped the fence tightly all the way as I have fear (或用phobia) of heights.
Next day we went shopping to Ginza. While walking in the big street, we
suddenly smelled(或用smelt) something real stinking. Oh ! it was the smell
of the ' smelly tofu ' from a food stall. I ate one and it was yummy. In the
afternoon, as dad and mum were getting tired, we all went for a spar ; it was
ever so relaxing.
On the last day in Japan, we went to a sushi restaurant. As we didn't
(或用couldn't)speak Japanese, we instead spoke English to the waiter. We ordered a crab, lots of shushi and some sashimi, and they were all very delicious.
At last, we happily came back home by plane. I was so happy to finally
have my wish fulfilled after all these years and I thought the trip was so
far the best one I ever had before.

i asked -> i had asked
i had wished -> i had been wishing
i hold the fence -> i held the fence
high -> height
next day -> in the next day
i had eaten -> i ate
last day -> on the last day
although -> since
we talked -> we had spoken