可以幫我把中文作返做英文嗎..

你寫得不錯，雖然有些句子連繫上好有問題，令我有衝動要「加害」你了，照你原文轉英文，將來你是否真有能力創業則未為知了，努力學好中英兩文才可以有心有力嘛。

a.We will set up our retail shop in Mongkok. It is because Mongkok has much people traffic, and male customers of ages 18 to 25 are generally shoppers there. The shops in Mongkok are generally young lines. Our shop's primary clothings are being colourful, so it will attract young men. In addition, our target cutomers mix composes of about half by tourists and half by locals.

b. Key local customers: 20-30 year-old working class/nice dresser white collar workers/students, etc. Similar line of products as 2%/Chocolate/I.T.. Affortable to locals of medium income and mid social status.

c. Key tourist customers: Tourists are one of our cutomer base, about 40% will be from Mainland China, another 10% will be of foreign countries. Mongkok is a must-visit place for them.

d. Our shop will be located at Sai Yeung Choi Street. This is where the shoppers concentrated.

e. Promotion: For purchase value total HKD2,000 will be eligible for a membership which has a fixed discount for future purchases.

f. Advertising: Our shop will be adverstised in two magazine, milk and Touch. It is because these two youth magazines have contents on trendy fashion and it is published weekly. Our initial advertisment package on these two magazine will last for 6 months, then we can evaluate the outcome.

g. We will install advertisment board in Mongkok. The image of the board will show active, colourful and with exaggeration styles.

a. We will choose to open retail Mong Kok, Mong Kok, not only because many people, the age of 18-25 years old men, will be used to Mong Kok to spend because there are many, Mong Kok, the brand designed for young people, our company mainly made with brightly colored clothing, so it will attract many young men, also, our goal guests, about half are tourists, half locals,

b. local important customers: those who work out of 20-30 years of age / love dressing up both white-collar workers / students, etc.. because the price of the company's products are similar to 2% / Chocolate / It, so guests do not have high local income and social class do not high, can be paid to the bile.

c. passenger important customer base: Our visitors have also a very important customer base, I believe about 40% of all consumption from the Mainland, while the other 10% will be foreign tourists. Mong Kok must have been one of their border point!

d. the location of our company will consider opening Sai Yeung Choi Street, Mong Kok, Mong Kok, which is a concentration of flow.

e.Promotion: HKD $ 2000 can buy enough to join the membership, a membership shopping discounts

f. Advertising: Our company will use the two magazines to promotional, respectively, Department of milk and Touch, because the two magazines are designed for young people, the majority of content on the latest trend of clothes, there will be a week of each new publishing, so we will try in June the company were to advertise in these magazines, then look at the results.

g. We will install signs and advertisements to promote in Mong Kok. The image ads will use a good move, colorful and vibrant and exaggerated