I wrote this song let me know what you think?

2010-05-23 11:31 am
People talk like were crazy in love,
i can tell by the look on your face,
i wont forget your touch,
just close your eyes,

I met a girl that took my breath away,
i walked to her,
for a while she would say,
look up and you'll see my eyes,
forget the suns down,
and you'll realize

baby dont leave my side,
stay for awhile,
ill take you forever inside,

ive been looking for her all along
thats why im writing this song,
sounds like the first day we met,

People talk like were crazy in love,
i can tell by the look on your face,
i wont forget your touch,
just close your eyes,

I met a girl that took my breath away,
i walked to her,
for a while she would say,
look up and you'll see my eyes,
forget the suns down,
and you'll realize

woah oh, woah oh,
woah oh,

Forget the past,baby, cant dwell on it forever

woah oh, woah oh,
woah oh,

sounds like the first day we met

回答 (2)

2010-05-23 11:35 am
✔ 最佳答案
That is a brilliant song- great lyrics - very meaningful you are a great song writer what tune is the song in???? slow , fast , medium but so far the lyrics are great
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2010-05-23 6:54 pm
wowowo
i love it. it is so great, can u write more??
u write it so well, u really a genius.
send to me if u write something new.
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