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[匿名]

2010-05-21 9:43 pm

Dear Sir,

I am writing to look for a post for the piano accompaniment in your ballet school. I am a secondary five student and I has just finish the HKCEE.

Being a piano accompanist has long been my aspiration and I would be grateful if I can start my career in such a famousballet school.
With my good sight-reading skill, I’ll surelyget this job done. I believed the job car widen my horizons and sharpen mycompetitiveness edges. Enclosed please find my resume and I will be thankfulif an interview will be granted at a time convenient to you.

中文就係咁既
.希望尋找一份在芭蕾舞學校的鋼琴伴奏工作(PART-TIME)
.會考剛完,大部分時間可以工作
.希望長做
.級數在RESUME寫左,不用加
.良好的讀譜技能(SIGHT-READING),更快掌握工作
.有耐性,不怕辛苦,性格開朗,容易融入公司
.多年的伴奏和教學經驗
.相信在貴公司開始鋼琴伴奏工作是最好的方向

回答 (1)

Edith

2010-05-21 10:23 pm

✔ 最佳答案

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to apply for the post of the piano accompaniment in your ballet school.

As a fresh graduate of Form 5,I hope to obtain more working experience and build up my social life circle. I believed that as a highly motivated, energetic and hardworking person, I can make a valuable contribution if I join your company.I have good sight-reading skill and being a piano accompanist is my ideal career and I would be grateful if I can start my career in your ballet school.

I have the capability to work under pressure. I sincerely hope that you would provide me an opportunity, not only because I need the salary, but because this type of job would improve my ability.

Enclosed is my resume with details for your kind reference. I look forward to having an opportunity for an interview in which I can further present my suitability for this position.

Thank you for your time and consideration.

Yours faithfully,

(Your OWN Name)

2010-05-21 14:25:25 補充：
If you know the name of the SIR/MADAM,you should use....
Dear Mr./Mrs./Ms. XXX

Yours sincerely,

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