唔該幫我改正錯既英文文法..

只改正，冇改寫，所以講的次序唔合理自己預演一次聽自己作為聽眾連唔連到。


Good morning everybody. Thank You all for coming to this presentation about the new model Treadmill TK106.
Do you want to have an attractive figure? Do you care about your body and health? Do you want to go to the gym room but do not have enough timeX? Are you afraid using the treadmill will have an accident? Do you want to own a treadmill but you’re afraid your home do not have enough space to place the machine?
Well, now you need not worry about this I’m here this morning to present our company’s new product. It is the new model treadmill that let the people to exercise at home. It can settle many issues that you are worry about, and make you satisfied. A treadmill is an exercise machine for running or walking while staying in one place
Now, I know you’re going to be very excited about the TK106. FirstXX, we will talk about the purpose of our productX. After that, we’ll talk about the existing treadmill situation and need for change. Finally, we’d like present our suggestion; this will show you the advantage of the TK106. Is everybody happy with this agenda?
First, I’d like to talk about the first feature of this machine, our old model Treadmill did not have connectivity to MP3 system. For this new model TK106 machine, If you felt boring when you are training, it is not a problem, TK106 is we have installed a music broadcast systemX so that you can felt relax to enjoy music while you practice the training. Now after my part, I will invite my colleague/partner Tat to explain the next feature of our Treadmill to you.

Good morning everyONE, thank you for coming to this presentation ON OUR new Treadmill, MODEL: TK106.
Do you want to have AN attractive figure? Do you care about your health? Do you want to go to the gym but do not have enough time? HAVE YOU EVER CAME ACROSS IN AN ACCIDENT ON A treadmill? Do you want to have A treadmill but THERE'S A PROBLEM STORING IT IN YOUR HOUSE?
Well, now you need NO worrIES about ALL OF THE ABOVE. AND YOU WILL BE SATISFIED AFTER THE PRESENTATION. I’m here to INTRODUCE TO YOU our company'S new product. It is A new treadmill: TK106. NOW YOU CAN HAVE EXERCISE RIGHT at YOUR home.
Firstly, we will talk about the objective of THE PRODUCT. After that, we’ll talk about the Existing situation and need of change (?唔係好明你既思). Finally, we’d like TO present our advantageS of THE TK106. The first feature WE ADDED A NEW MUSIC BROADCAST SYSTEM TO THE MACHINE. IT REPLACES THE MP3 system ON THE PREVIOUS MODELS. So that you can enjoy YOUR FAVORITE musicS AND RADIO STATIONS WHILE YOU ARE ON IT. Now, (唔駛講after my part) I will invite MY COLLEAGUE: Tat to explain the next feature of THE Treadmill.

Good morning everybody. Thank You all for coming to this presentation about the new model Treadmill TK106.
Do you want to have an attractive figure? Do you care about your body and health? Do you want to go to the gym but you do not have enough times? Are you afraid that the treadmill may cause accidents? Do you want to own a treadmill but you are anxious that your home is not large enough to place the machine?
Well, now you need not worry about this as I’m here this morning to present you our company's new product. It is the treadmill of the lastest model, which allow people to be able to have sport at home. It can settle many problems which you are worry about, and satisfy your want. A treadmill is an exercising machine for running or walking while staying at the same place
Now, I know you’re very excited about the TK106. Firstly, we will talk about the objective of our products. After that, we’ll talk about the Existing situation and the need of change. Finally, we’d like present our suggestion; this will show you the advantage of TK106. Is everybody happy with this agenda?
So let me talk about the first feature of this machine. Our old model Treadmill could not link to a MP3 system. But for this new model TK106 , if you feel boring when you are exercising on it, it is not a problem, TK106 is installed with the music broadcast system, so that you can feel relax to enjoy music when you exercise. Now, let's invite our staff Tat to explain the next feature of our Treadmill to you.