英文功課【weekly writing】

2010-05-17 7:46 pm
1. parent 's Day is coming. How do you feel excited? Why ??







2. what kids of outing would you like to go on ?? Why?







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2010-05-17 9:10 pm
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frist, i would like to point out that there might be sth wrong about your question.....parent 's Day is coming. How do you feel excited? Why ??.......it should be either parent 's Day is coming. How do you feel ? (q1a)or parent 's Day is coming. why do you feel excited?(q1b) what kids of outing would you like to go on ?? Why?(q2) should have a typing mistake as i think kids should be kinds

q1b Parent's day is coming and i feel excited as i am very looking foeward to see my results. if it is good, i will work harder to keep the standard and reward myself by dining out at a fine restaurant with my parents as i world like to share the joy with them. however, in case the result is bad, i will try to find out the reason and work harder in order to imporve my result.

q1a u can use my q1b ans well for this question...i will think another ans later on if i have time.

q2 i would like to go a country park outing as i world like to explore about nature and we can have bbq there. it's always better than sitting in fornt of computer.

it's a bit short as i am leack of ideas....bit i'll fix it later if i have time

i do it as a short task so if it is a acticle, plz infrom my again. besides u should cheek for the spelling and comfrim the questoins again as if u type it wrong i will do it wrong

2010-05-26 8:34 am
for the first question i will say

i feel really excited about parent's day, because this is a good time to say thanks to my parents for all that they did to me.

okay if they permitted you to say in short form, i will not add anything more. but if they want you to answer more detail, then i will say this.

i feel really excited about parent's day, because this is a good time to say thanks to my parents for all that they did to me. then i will set up a dinner by myself, so they can enjoy it and they will not have to do any housework. then i will do whatever they do in home as normal.

then for the second question, i will say

i would like to go to science museum for outing, because there are lots of things to play. i can learn things while i am playing with the facilities in the museum. i can even go with my friends to there, then i will build up a stronger relationship with my friends. after the outing, i will learn lots of things that we can't learn in the classroom and i believe that will be great fun.

reminder: remember to put all the i in capital letters, because i did not put any.
and remember check with the spelling, because i may spell something wrong...
參考: myself


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