✔ 最佳答案
聖主頌
創始萬物永光父
世人迷失仍拯救
道成肉身成人子
死而復活勝魔權
榮耀升天樂園聚
恩澤惠厚賜風靈
萬國得聞救贖心
千年一日待從來
天地更新人亦變
永恆生命在延綿
God in Meditation
Father the light of all creations
World of loss in desperation
Word in flesh of humiliation
Death defeated in resurrection
Rise to paradise in exultation
Goodness Spirit gives consolation
Nations’ atoned in restitution
Thousand-day for generations
Renew all in transformationEverlasting life in restoration.
參考: 唔知你係作英文rhyming poem還是中文「感謝上帝」,但未rhym到,所以你要自己發揮