英文Grammar問題

2010-05-16 3:45 am

可唔以幫我睇下有咩錯左啊?唔該哂！(每條有兩個錯。)

1) As you are an experienced customer of our company, you can enjoy a discount if you place your order within this month.

2) The engineers collaborated together in order to produce the uniquely original final outcomes of their research. The report will be sent tomorrow morning to your office giving details of the research.

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David

2010-05-16 4:55 am

✔ 最佳答案

1) As you are an experienced customer of our company, you can enjoy a discount if you place your order within this month.

1. Loyal Customer (尊貴客人)
2. When you place your order within this month.

2) The engineers collaborated together in order to produce the uniquely original final outcomes of their research. The report will be sent tomorrow morning to your office giving details of the research.

1. the word produce change to come up with some...outcomes of their research.
2. The report will be sent tomorrow morning to your office giving details of the research. To your office之後要停. 後面Ｄ係多餘的了。因為之前果句已經提過不用再提。

2010-05-15 20:57:04 補充：
應該用Loyal Customer (尊貴客人)，EXPERIENCED CUSTOMER錯的.係指: 經驗豐富的客人.

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