Hi, I am a Chinese English teacher in China, I would like some help from native speakers.
The following is the teaching materials I wrote, how do you make them sound more professional?
How would you say these sentences or the general idea in your own words?
Please feel free to correct or modify each of the sentences, or rewrite the whole thing in your own words. Thank you very much! This would be extremely useful and important to me.
My Oath
I love the earth, because you're my home.
I love China because you're my motherland.
I love the soil under my feet, because you're my hometown
To myself
I respect myself!
I appreciate myself!
I believe myself!
To those who help me
I thank you for your help.
Because you give me strength, courage, and confidence.
English question, please help?
2010-05-05 4:11 am
回答 (2)
2010-05-05 4:16 am
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What you do is commendable indeed.I would make these changes:
My Oath:
I shall forever love the earth, for it is my home.
I shall forever love China, for she is my motherland.
I shall forever love the soil beneath my feet, for it is my residence.
To Myself:
I respect you.
I appreciate you.
I believe in you.
To those who help me:
I thank you because you give me strength, courage, and confidence.
2010-05-05 4:17 am
Overall, I think it's all very good. I have only a few suggestions for each of the sections.
Under my oath:
I love the earth, because IT IS (or it's) my home
I love China, because IT IS (it's) my motherland
I love the soil under my feet, because IT IS (it's) my hometown,
You could also say I love you, earth, because you're my home
I love you, China, because you're my motherland
I love you, soil under my feet, because you're my hometown
Under to myself:
The only thing here is the last statement... it should be I believe IN myself.
I hope this helps!
Under my oath:
I love the earth, because IT IS (or it's) my home
I love China, because IT IS (it's) my motherland
I love the soil under my feet, because IT IS (it's) my hometown,
You could also say I love you, earth, because you're my home
I love you, China, because you're my motherland
I love you, soil under my feet, because you're my hometown
Under to myself:
The only thing here is the last statement... it should be I believe IN myself.
I hope this helps!
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