英文翻譯(超急明早八點之前)

*** ?? 也要翻譯??... 我改用damn..
而且, 你要的是3段翻譯, 起碼15分吧 ~~~ ^^
放心, 以下100%由我自己翻譯的. 而且, 字中一些特別/專有名詞也是仔細查明後才用. 絕對是正確英語用法.

This was the military uniform I worn, when I was serving the army.
Because of the Voluntary Recruitment Battalion of the Marine Corps, I joined it when I was 18 years old. However, I felt damn agony and the time was running so slowly that one day like a year during it. Fortunately, I mustered it safely. That was really a nightmare, when I am thinking of it now.

This saxophone performer is my favorite one, she is pretty and amazing. In year 2008, summer, she launched a mini-concert in Taiwan. Its melody fused with jazz and Rock ‘n’ roll that the combination was stunning. This was the CD that I requested her signing on it after the show.
I think I was so luckily she launched the concert in Taiwan and I could participate it.

Last, those wasted papers must be the most miserable memories to me ever since I was in university. I did wallow into the sports’ lottery and did bring me fortune. However, to those without winning any prizes, it enables me to understand there is no free lunch.

2010-05-03 05:54:31 補充：
*** I did wallow into the sports' lottery "that" did bring me fortune.
將and, 改為that

This military uniform is I the military uniform which puts on the army service, 18 year old of that year, because of the voluntary service's relations, I has joined marine corps, serves in the process, I felt his mother's great agony, experiences one day like a year feeling really does not feel better, what is lucky, I safe retired from the armed services, now thought that is really nightmare. This Sakesifeng the performer is one which I most like, the human long is very attractive, is also very fierce, when 08 year summer, he comes Taiwan to have a small performance meeting, bent the wind to fuse knight and the rock and roll, let the human for it startled one kind of combination, this was after finishing invites cd which she helped me to sign, I thought that I very lucky might see he came Taiwan to manage the performance meeting Since finally these elephant scrap paper's thing, has certainly been my university the most pitiful recollection, I once wallowed the movement lottery ticket, he once let my evening becoming rich, but is similar to you sees these not the lottery ticket, also lets me understand the world has not eaten without paying lunch