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I would like (want也可以) to introduce something that they are valuable and memorable to me.
First of all, the cards, these cards were presented by my friends for my birthdays or during special events. I have conserved them since I was a child. Although they are not costly, its implication and value are priceless.
Second of all, the 2 CDs. By the time, I was learning to play piano; these CDs were recorded before launching a show. These CDs contain the performance details of all performers participating at this event. After constantly practicing and performing, I felt so relaxed and happy that the impression was the most unforgettable memory to me.
Last, this commemorates my brave daring to undergo the surgery. I will never forget the process causing me pain and the pain after recovering from narcosis. I thereby admired myself daring to do so.
2010-05-02 20:40:12 補充:
Version (2….1) ** 我比較喜歡
I want to introduce the most valuable and memorable things for myself.
Firstly, these cards were presented by my friends either for my birthdays or for special events. (cont..)
2010-05-02 20:41:17 補充:
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...I have conserved them since I was a child, as its implication and value are priceless whereas they are not costly at all.
Secondly, these 2CDs were recorded purposely for press release by the time I was learning about piano... (cont.)
2010-05-02 20:41:38 補充:
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... hese CDs contained the performance details of all performers participating at the show. In which, the most impressive moments to me were the preparation of a piano exercise over and over, and the relaxation and happiness after the performance that is unforgettable. ... (cont)
2010-05-02 20:42:13 補充:
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... Last, this is something to commemorate my brave daring to undergo the surgery. I will never forget the process causing me pain and the pain after recovering from anaesthetized. I thereby admired myself daring to do so... (END)
2010-05-02 20:42:47 補充:
Version (3.....3) .. 應該是 (2....3)
第一個字 "THESE"
2010-05-03 01:45:34 補充:
第一句"for myself", 改為"of myself"