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I chose not to turn up on wednesday during tutorial time because I have had two EDCP assignments due on thursday (one was an assignment to be resubmitted), not to mention the Maths test on monday. I didn't have enough time to revise maths at all. That's why I decided I therefore decided to stay home to finish my assignments rather than (定instead of? both are correct but instead of is preferred) attending a test which that had no confidence in of getting high grades (加at? Not necessary.) .However , In this connection , i'd like to seek your consent (定permission? Permission is better.) to do have the make-up test in week14.

I shaded those incorrect words in yellow followed by the correction in red.


2010-05-02 06:06:35 補充：
that 'I' before 'had' was deleted accidentally and should be reinstated.

You had confidence in something and had confidence of doing something.

2010-05-02 06:41:19 補充：
Sorry, I make a mistale. 'in' should be better in your case.

I chose not to turn up the tutorial on wednesday because I have two EDCP assignments due on thursday, of which one is to re-do for certain groups, without mentioning the Physics test on monday. I didn't have enough time to revise Maths at all. That's why I decided to stay home to finish off my assignments rather than attend a test where I was not confident of getting high grades. However, I ask for your permission to have a make-up test in Week 14.


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1. "...because I had two ECDP..."，因為前面用 past tense。或者你將佢拆開兩句，例如：I have two EDCP... Therefore I chose not to...

2. rather than 和 instead of 都可以

3. "...in getting high grades." 不用加 at。

4. 看來這篇東西是寫給老師的，所以我認為用 permission 比 consent 好些。

5. week14 應改為 week 14。