This can be involved in different kinds of activities as a way to care about the communities
呢句岩唔岩grammar???
係involved in 定係involving in???
係to care定係to care about???
thx!
英文grammar問題. 急!
2010-04-30 1:46 pm
回答 (5)
2010-04-30 3:01 pm
✔ 最佳答案
翻譯:這可以涉及很多不同類型的活動,作為關心社會的方法.1 grammar啱
用咗be,即係被動,用involved啱,involving錯,除非唔係被動式,前面冇be
2 care後面有其他字就應該加前置詞,呢度解關心,用care about
2010-05-01 1:52 am
'care for' sounds better
2010-05-01 12:20 am
不太肯定你的this是甚麼，但似乎你用了很多中文詞在當中，但英文有些動詞本身已經包含一定的「能力」。
我會這樣改為：
This involves different kinds of activities as a way to care for the community.
當中試用最簡單直接表達主旨，"This" is a way to care for the community.是care for關懷，不是care about關心。你關心一件事只是收取資訊，你關係一件事你才會有行動。希望這細微的用詞令你明白寫作要「精準」的道理。
我會這樣改為：
This involves different kinds of activities as a way to care for the community.
當中試用最簡單直接表達主旨，"This" is a way to care for the community.是care for關懷，不是care about關心。你關心一件事只是收取資訊，你關係一件事你才會有行動。希望這細微的用詞令你明白寫作要「精準」的道理。
2010-04-30 3:56 pm
This will involve different kinds of (social) activiites, which is a way to show our care about the community.
2010-04-30 3:48 pm
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