What do you think about my English paragraph?

it is childish?

The Turkish government needs educate the public about gender equality in the workplace in order to increase female employment rates. All employers should be educated and well-informed about gender equality, and there should be penalties for businesses that have too few female workers. Furthermore, women should be encouraged to study at universities and get a high quality education. TV series and the Turkish media should show that women are as talented as men and should encourage employers to hire female managers and directors for their businesses. Moreover, people who have sexist behaviours in working places must be punished by government. Successful businesswomen deserve to be awarded and presented as role models for future generations.