有人可以幫我翻譯成英文嗎?

以英文表達, 不可直接用中文翻譯成英文


VERSION (1)
我有100萬, 我會先繳清助學貸款, 剩下的錢拿去定存,
老實說100萬實在不是很多, 很多事情沒辦法做
= If I would have 1 million ($$), I would settle study loan first and would save the balance into my saving account.
Frankly speaking, 1 million is not enough to solve many issues.

所以除了高興有100萬之外, 還是專心顧好課業比較重要,
畢竟人的一生中, 一定有好幾個100萬等著你去賺, 只看過去有沒有努力而已
= I'm glad to have 1 million, whereas focus in studying is more important.
Nevertheless, there are chances to earn many more millions throughout a life that depends whether you put efffort or not.



2010-04-28 18:06:03 補充：
grant loan = 助學金 (所以, 請改上文.. 我打得太快.. 忘記修改)

2010-04-28 18:08:07 補充：
VERSION (2)....1
I would settle the grant loan first and deposit the rest into my saving account, while I would have 1 million. However, it is honestly not enough to solve many issues.

2010-04-28 18:08:31 補充：
VERSION (2)....第2段
I'd glad to have 1 million, but it would be more crucial to focus in studying. There are chances to earn many more millions throughout a life that depends whether you put effort into it or not.

2010-04-28 18:10:05 補充：
crucial 前不用more.. 忘記delete.. 請自行更正

If I had 1 million dollars, I would pay student's loan first, and save superfluous money.
Although say, 1 million dollars really isn't many and then thus many things can't do.
Although there is very happy 1 million dollars, still be absorbed in lesson more important!
After all, in the person's whole life, definitely having quite a few 1 million dollars can earn and just see have effort in the past.

如果我有了一百萬元，我會先繳清助學貸款，而且存多餘的錢。
雖然說，一百萬元真的不是許多，然後如此許多事物不能做。
雖然有非常快樂的一百萬元，然而正專注於課更重要的！
畢竟，在人的整個生活方面，一定有相當多的一百萬元能賺得而且僅僅見到在過去有努力。

我打的僅供參考!

如果有誤!

請寬恕!

If I have one million
I will first paid student loans
Then the rest of the money away in fixed deposit
Honestly one million is not much
Many things can not do

So be glad that there are 1 million outside
Or focus on the saying schoolwork is more important
After all, people's life
Must have several 1 million waiting for you to earn
Just look at the past, not to just

以上為譯文!

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