修改/美化 80字英文

2010-04-28 6:36 am
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最緊要係grammar... 如果可以的話幫我改改..
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2010-04-28 2:49 pm
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修改/美化 80字英文


Double decker bridges exist to serve different purposes by providing two road levels. Most have four to six lanes of motor traffic on the upper deck while the lower deck has cycling and walking tracks. There are also bridges that provide special amenities such as the tower of Novy Most Bridge in Bratislava which houses a restaurant. This increases the building cost of such bridges.

Budget does not always consist of the construction costs alone. For instance, in site preparation there are the demolition costs for existing infrastructures or edifices , and the compensation paid to existing landlords.
2010-04-28 9:12 pm
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Here comes my suggested revision:

In order to build a new bridge that would become another landmark of Sydney while not distracting the existing architectural attractions, a calculated, painstaking design is required. Moreover, aside from the design, the construction cost should also be taken into account and need to be seriously considered.

The construction cost depends heavily on the materials used and labour costs. Research has been done from several reliable sources on the Internet, regarding the constructions of existing bridges in other cities. The information shows that there are six types of bridges in general, and the costs of building each type of bridge in similar length vary greatly – mainly due to the difference in materials.
參考: hkslot
2010-04-28 7:27 pm
同上,有些部份重新寫改用較合文理的用詞


Double-decker bridges are constructed to provide two levels to serve transportation purposes. Most have 4-6 lanes for two-way motor vehicles on the upper deck while railroad tracks on the lower deck. There also exist bridges that have special installation on them, such as the tower of Novy Most Bridge in Bratislava with a restaurant on it. The more complex the construction of such bridges, the higher the cost.

The budget of a bridge building project often consists not just the construction cost alone. For instance, edifice and residenal housing may require demolition to prepare for the bridge construction; landlords and tenants compensation and reallocation cost may be inclusive in the project budget.
2010-04-28 4:14 pm
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