幫我修正我譯的英文正確嗎? 20分 文法要對!!!!

2010-04-26 1:35 am
hi~ 我明要用powerpoint 介紹..1開始這樣說可以嗎.幫我看1下 和改正我不對的文法 thx =]




Hello everybody .. my name is xxx, today I will introduce a product, I hope you will like it

This product is fragrance .. on the left is the boys used and on the right is the girls used

This is a fragrance of differences in capacity, including 40ml / 75ml / 125ml and so on .....

Purpose is to keep the body fragrant.

Out or bath, lightly spray on the wrist, neck, ears and other pulse in the vicinity.
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中文係咁的 : 我要英文 thx 大家好..我叫xxx,今天我會為大家介紹一種產品,希望你們會喜歡, 這個產品就是香水..左邊是男生使用,右邊是女生使用 這一種香水分別有不同的容量,包括40毫升/ 75毫升/ 125毫升等等的..... 用途是保持身體芬芳。 出或洗澡,輕輕噴於手腕,頸部,耳朵和其他脈衝在附近。 如果開場白可以幫我加小小野都得 =]

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2010-04-26 11:23 pm
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Hello everybody… my name is xxx. I would like to share with you a refreshing morning, so I am going to introduce a product which I hope all of you would like it.
This product is fragrance... the product on the left is for the boys, and that on the right is for the girls.
This fragrance comes in different sizes, including 40ml / 75ml / 125ml and more...
The purpose of using this fragrance is to keep the body scented and soothing.
Apply before going out or after bath, spray a little bit on the wrist, neck, ears and pulses nearby.

幫我看1下和改正我不對的文法 thx:藍色字
如果開場白可以幫我加小小野都得:紅色字,等你同觀眾有多少少交流
參考: hkslot
2010-04-26 10:30 am
Hello every body, my name is xxxxx. Today, i would like to introduce to you a very nice product, the fragrance. I hope you would like it.

The one on the left handside is cologne which is made for men.

The one on the right handside is perfume, for ladies.

These fragrances come with 3 volumes, 40ml, 74 ml and 125 ml.

Just spray a little on the wrist, the neck, the ear or around the pulse after the shower, it would keep the body fragrant for many hours.


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