英文日記翻譯，請幫忙check文法是否有誤

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這邊是你的原文，我幫你做了文法上的修改:

It is raining heavily in an early moring,so the weather is little bit cold,

I
can not go out to have some fun, which makes me feel bad.

All at once,I
have bought some Sapodilla from my colleague,

It is still in the refrigerator.I went to taste it.

It is sour and sweet,it is
interesting to eat cold snack in cold weather.

不過以上的英文內容與你本來的中文內容有些許差異，下面是修改過後較為通順的英文翻譯:

It has been raining heavily since the morning, also the weather is a little bit cold. The bad weather upsets me, because I can not go out and have some fun. I suddenly remembered that the Sapodilla fruit which I bought from my colleague is still in the refrigerator. I went to get some and tasted them. They have a fascinating flavor of sweet and sour, it is a different feeling to have cold snack in cold weather.

另外，其實真正老外在寫英文或是日記的時候，句子很少會一行一句，通常是連在一起的形成一篇文章唷。

希望這樣有幫到你！^^

今早一直在下雨. It has being raining since early morning.

這裡的天氣是中文的講法. 英文大概都會用 temperature, 直接用氣溫來表達.

It has been raining since early this morning,the weather is a little chilly.I feel
bad because I can't go out and have fun.All of a suddent I thought of the Mango Ice I bought from my co-worker yesterday, which is still in the freezer.I ran to it
right away to have a taste,the mixture of sweetness and sourness was superb!
Having icy treat in a cold day like this is actually differnt and nice in a way!

Today has been a long rain, the weather a little bit cold

I'm feel bad , because I can't go out to play,

Suddenly I remember that I bought Valentine's fruit ice from my Colleague
yesterday , it was also in the refrigerator.

I immediately ran to taste it a bit ,

Super sweet and sour taste, it is intersting to eat ice snack in cold weather.


應該是這樣，希望對你有幫助