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2010-04-24 3:57 am

how to be a happy and useful person.(topic)
I am a helpful person.I help anyone who is difficult for his work every time.I don't
think my return. I help with anyone, which is my best return.I feel happy.I think i
that i am a useful person.Why?Since i help someone to solve problem , i am a
useful person.
A terrible sick cannot be treated in the world.It is regret.Anyone is regretful for something but it cannot restart.We will become a happy and useful person as long as we don't do any regretful thing
Responsibility is improtant.Anyone cannot finish their resonsibility, and then
they are sad.They think they are useles.They feel happy as long as they finish
their responsibility.They feel they are useful.
In a nutshell, we are helpful.We can finish our responsibility.We don't do any
regretful thing.I am a happy and useful person.
請大膽指出我的文法,句意等錯誤
講出有何方法能改善作文能力
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回答 (4)

[匿名]

2010-04-24 9:14 am

✔ 最佳答案

I am a helpful person. I help anyone who has difficulty at work all the time and I don’t expect any returns. My best return is the sense of happiness after helping someone.
I think i am an useful person. Why? It is because I help people to solve problems frequently.
A terribly sick person cannot be treated in this world. It is a regret. Anyone who is regretful for something yet cannot be restarted will feel remorse. We will become a happy and useful person as long as we don't do any things regretful.
Responsibility is another important factor too. Anyone cannot finish their responsibilities will become sad. They think they are useless. They feel happy and useful only if they finish their responsibilities.
In sum, we are helpful. We can finish our responsibilities and do not do any
regretful things.

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Minnie

2010-04-26 3:34 am

your grammer is so bad

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