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Actually, modern men are getting better and better at equipting themselves. They not only care about their reputation, they even care about their personal taste which attracts the opposite sex and builds up their confidence in their career. To upgrade their attraction, a unique perfume would be perfect for them.
Dolce & Gabbana's Light Blue Pour Homme perfume has a light scent of the ocean, with its classical bottle and the velvet in the design of the box is a symbol of elegant men .

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Just by looking at the sales figures of the perfume line by David Beckham, we can tell the following: Truly, men of the modern age have become aware of dressing-up themselves. It is beyond the concern of personal reputation, further to pursue of personal lifestyle, to attract the opposite sex for better relationship, to land a better career, and to gain more confidence.

In order to boost the charm of men, a bottle of specialize perfume will surely lend a hand.

Dolce & Gabanna’s Light Blue Pour Homme men perfume, with light ocean scent, plus a classical bottle and velvet package design, is a symbolic representation of an elegant male figure.
坦白講，你的中文文句本身有點混雜無章，雖然把很多形容詞和多個角度放在一起，但層次夾雜不明。只能在譯文中略為梳理，希望不會是中英對照版，只是你想用英文作文的內容。若不，則要重寫中文部份。