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2010-04-17 11:06 pm
Three Chief Executives from the company's Head Offlicein Frankfurt will visit our branch office in Hong Kong.The visitors will tour the main office in causeway Bay and make a site visit our factory in Shenzhen.The schedule to arrive at office at 10a.m. on 12August2010.The visit will last for three hours.
On the day of the visit,everything must be neat and tidy and everyone well-dressed in order to give a good impression to visitors.Office staff please tidy up the offlice,be ready to meet them and answer questions.
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2010-04-20 12:26 pm
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Three Chief Executives from the company's Head Office in Frankfurt will visit our branch office in Hong Kong . The visitors will tour the main office in Causeway Bay and make a site visit to our factory in Shenzhen. They are scheduled to arrive our office at 10a.m. on 12August2010. The visit will last for three hours.
On the day of the visit, everything must be neat and tidy and everyone must be well-dressed in order to give a good impression to the visitors. Office staff should clean up the office prior to their visit. The staff should also be ready to meet with them and answer their questions.
2010-04-20 12:26 am
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