英文翻譯 - 唔該

英文翻譯

我現正填寫 員工薪酬報表(I.R.56B) , 煩請回覆 May Lee 的職位名稱．（可見附件）
I am preparing
employer's tax return ( employees remunerations and pensions form
(I.R.56B) ) for the year 1/4/2009 to 31/3/2010. Please reply with the
name of position of Mary Lee. (as per attachment)

2010-04-17 09:14:18 補充：
Sorry!
Mary Lee should be May Lee.

Basically, your sentences are correct. However, it would be better to rewrite the following in a more polite way.

Please Kindly confirm the position for May Lee. (Please see the attachment or rewite as - the attachment is for your easy reference)

I now just fill in the 1/4/2009 to 31/3/2010 staff report (I.R.56B), please reply to the posts name May Lee (annex).

In my opinion, the sentences are well-written and correct. No changes whatsoever can be made.