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cca321456：
Ladies and gentlemen, what I am to talk about is the bobbies and interests
of the youth these days.Firstly I would like to comment on why a majority
of teenagers like playing with computer ; because it can bring them pleasure and instant information technology. However, most teenagers
practically indulge themslves in it just for pleasure. Secondly, there are
many teenagers, on the other hand, like playing balls such as basket ball,
which is beneficial to their health, and many of them feel that basket ball
is a very exciting game to them.
Well, these are the hobbies of the youth these days I wanted to say and
thank you all.

'.' some people above translate to chinglish, or grammatical mistakes
i would like to translate once more here.
因不知道你在什麼場合用，所以寫了兩種,FORMAL D 同無咁FORMAL
1.good morning/afternoon everyone./ Ladies and gentlemen. may i introduce the interests of teenagers. First of all/ Firstly, computer brings us happiness and is a enormous resourse, therefore many teenagers love to use computers/ love using computer. however, nowadays, teenagers are most likely using computer for fun only such that it makes lots of them addict to it. Moreover, a lot of youngers play ball games which good for your health, for example, basketball as teens think that it is exciting. The above mentioned are the interest of the nowadays teenagers. Thank you.

2 Hi/hello everyone. i'd like to introduce the hobbies of teens in this generation. let me tell you why most of the teens like playing/using computers. It is fun and can bring message to everyone. However, teens addicted to computers since they love playing computer games. Secondly, teens play ball games such as basketball.It has a lot of fun and it is exciting. These are the hobbbies of teens i would like to say, thank you.

2010-04-14 19:12:01 補充：
1.teenagers like not teenagers likes
2. majority 用得不錯，記下它，majority and minority 常用到
3. everybody are good is chinglish. beware of it! this is not english. thank you for your attention
4.如果你FORMAL 的話，盡量少用 's , 改用XX OF YY
hope that these can help you, even you don't choose mine as the best ans.=]

讓我 幫你反譯吧 ！ hello. What I said today is the young people cao the good interest. First I will say why the majority young people will like playing the computer. Because the computer can take to the human the pleasure and the information, but the modern young people only use the computer to make the amusement, causes many young people to indulge. Second, now many youths play some to the body beneficial ball game, if basketball, because many youths think basketball very exciting.

This is the modern youth's hobby, Thats all I want to say. Thank you

以下是我的翻譯.......睇下啱唔啱用.

Everybody are good. What I said today is the hobby of young people. Firstly, I
would say why the majority young people will like playing computer, because
the computer can bring them pleasure and information. But the modern young
people only use the computer to make the amusement, it let them to indulge.
Secondly, in order to have a healthy body, many youths would like to play the
ball game, like basketball, because many youths believe basketball is very
exciting. This is the modern youth's hobby.

大家好。我今日說的是青年人的嘈好興趣。第一我將會說大多數青年人為何喜歡玩電腦。因為電腦能帶給人樂趣和資訊，但現代的青年人只用電腦作玩樂，使很多青年人沈迷。第二，現在很多青年都玩一些對身體有益的球類活動，如籃球，因為很多青年都覺得籃球很exciting。

這就是現代青年的嗜好，
That，s all I want to say.Thank you
Hello, everybody. I said today is that young people stayed and good interest. First I will say why the majority of young people like to play on the computer. The computer can give people pleasure and information, but modern computers for young people only play so many young people addicted. Second, many young people have to play some good ball on the body, such as basketball, because many young people feel that basketball is very exciting.

This is the modern habit of young people,
That, s all I want to say.Thank you