我既英文岩唔岩??幫幫手呀!好急!~thx~!

2010-04-14 3:00 am
我想講既係:今日我好似本日咁7點起床,之後梳洗,然後番學.但係我遲到,雖然我遲到,但呀爸同老師冇罵我,小息時,我同我既朋友係班房玩,我感得好happy. 今天是開心既一日.

英:

I wake up as usual at seven o'clock . Then combing the hair and wash the face .
Afterward, degust breakfast, after goes to school .
but, i was late . although I late , my father and teachers don't scolds me .
When short rest , i with my friend play in my class .
i feel very happy.
Today is happy day .

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如果錯咗可唔可以幫我改??唔該!^=^
p.s:我既英文奇差。唔好見怪 !^.^

回答 (4)

2010-04-15 1:37 am
✔ 最佳答案
I woke up as usual at seven o'clock. Washed my face and combed my hair. Then ate breakfast before set off to school.
Still I was late. Even though I was late, my father and teachere didn't scold me.
During the short rest period, I played with the friend in my class.
I felt happy.
Today is a happy day to me.

[注意一些動詞的用法和時態,除了最後一句總結語,其他我用了past tense因為你在記事,不過如你未識可以改番用present tense。]

Wash face first then comb hair. 你要先洗面,再梳頭;否則先梳頭後洗面個頭咪又亂番囉。
Set off = go, but implies going FROM the place" you ate breakfast = home.
內容有點不太連貫,不過總算寫到些東西出來。努力看多些故事書,學句子組合時如何編排,並且留心動詞
2010-04-14 3:34 am
I woke up as usual at seven o'clock in the morning . Then I combed my hair and washed my face .
After I had breakfast, I went to school .
Unluckily, I was late for school . Although I was late , my father and teachers did not scold me .
During recesses, my friends and I played in the classroom .
I felt very happy.
I had a happy day today .
2010-04-14 3:31 am
wal.wong 你好 ~~~

以下都是本人的一些意見而已,如有錯誤請多多指教!!

全文需用過去式,因為今日的事是已經發生了的。

I woke up at seven o'clock as usual. Then I combed my hair and washed my face.
After I had finished my breakfast, I went to school but I was late. Although I was late, my father and teachers didn’t scold me .
I played with my classmates during the recess.
I felt very happy today.
參考: Yogi
2010-04-14 3:04 am
冇咩錯吖,幾好!繼續努力!


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