以下呢一句grammar有錯嗎???

唔知你是因為寫了句英文譯番中文，還是你中文係咁諗一句句子。有時中文句都係svo的，可以直轉做英文。

我爸爸的去世給我(生命)帶來重大改變。

My father's passing has brought great changes to my life.

你已經很另識得is gone是去世，但應用句法表達時我覺得這樣寫會正面少少，passing是verbnoun，另外pass away亦是去世(這詞代下這句亦可以的)。讓你學多一些詞語和寫法，給讀者讀出你爸爸去世這要點先，然後帶出對你的影響，會讓人更切身體會多點，不會像一件新聞報告。


2010-04-13 18:10:08 補充：
sorry另=叻

I had a big change because my father passed away. (don't use gone)

我想我會change做'The big change for me is that my father is gone'

The big change for me is that my father is gone.

或

It is a big change for me that my father is gone.

"there is a big change" 本身係條complete sentence,

只要將佢改造subject就正常o架喇:

The big change for me is that my father is gone.

我會這樣寫 :

There is a big change for me because my father is gone .