Can you proof read my biography?

2010-04-08 3:29 pm
Hi! This is Jane from Hong Kong. My english is not good. Could you please help me to proof read it and make the words more better?

Biography
Jane Lee is a designer, Cartoonist, Artist, illustrator based in Hong Kong. She graduated from Hong Kong Design Institute. As a design student, she has been awarded as VTC Outstanding Awards Student 08/09. She is a sliver awards holder of Graphic Design in China Awards in Student Group. As a cartoonist and artist, she has had group exhibitions at France and United State. She has started to work with client since 2007.Her clients are come from United Kingdom, France, United State, Philippines and Hong Kong. She worked across from the field of comics, illustrations and design. She is a hardworking student and has lots of passion in design. In the future, she would like to get more challenge and training in the creative industry.

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2016-10-15 5:29 pm
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2010-04-08 3:36 pm
To me, it's not really a biography. It's more like a resume, something you'd give to potential clients or bosses.

Good job though?
2010-04-08 3:46 pm
Biography
Jane Lee is a designer, cartoonist, artist and illustrator based in Hong Kong. She graduated from Hong Kong Design Institute in [year?]. As a design student, she has been awarded the VTC Outstanding Student Award 08/09. She is a sliver awards holder of Graphic Design in China Awards in Student Group. As a cartoonist and artist, she has held group exhibitions in both France and the United States. She began working with clients in 2007. Her clientelle originates from the United Kingdom, France, United States, Philippines and Hong Kong. She has worked across the fields of comics, illustrations and design. She is a hardworking student and is passionate about design. She enjoys a challenge and is seeking further training in the creative industry.

Something like that?...but yes it sounds like a resume - I'm used to writing resumes for people!


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