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Earlier answers have some mistakes. 001 is quite good. 002 is totally unacceptable. Correct answers (in blue) with explanations (in red) are given below. Hope that they are helpful to you.


再给我多一次(one more)机会吧
Please give me one more chance. or
Would you please give me one more chance?

妳參與(participate, join is not correct)過什麼類型的活動呀(It is an account of your past experience, present perfect tense should be used. Use of simple past tense is definitely incorrect.)?
What kind of activities have you participated?


這價格(price)已包含服務費(service charge)?
Does this price include service charge? or
Has this price included service charge?


給我菜單
Menu, please.
你們有免費的飲品供應嗎?
Do you serve (or provide) any free drinks (beverages)?
Note
‘Do you have any free drinks?’ is grammatically correct. However, the meaning is not accurate enough (We have free drinks - but not for you!)
什麼飲品(Which drinks/beverages, but not what kind of drinks. If you ask ‘what kind of …’ The response can be ‘There are thousands of non-alcoholic drinks in the market, but we (the restaurant) have none. See the difference?)是沒有酒精 (non-alcoholic) 的呀?
Which drinks/beverages are non-alcoholic?

給我多點?
May I have some more? (When asking question, you usually need to add ‘some’ before more. The answer will be ‘Yes, you can have some more drink/food. You should not use ‘Could you …’ as you are making a request. )


我想要一份c餐的外賣
I would like to have a takeaway (‘takeaway’ is an adjective here) meal C (meal C but C meal. You are writing English but not Chinese). or
I would like to have a meal C takeaway (‘takeaway’ is a noun here)

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再给我多一次机会吧
Give me one more chance, please.


妳參與過什麼類型的活動呀?
What kinds of activities have you joined?


這價格已包含服務費?
Is the service charge included?


給我菜單
Can i have the menu, please?


你們有免費的飲品供應嗎?
Do you serve any beverages free?


什麼飲品是沒有酒精的呀?
Which beverages contain no alcohol?


給我多點?
Give me some more, please.


我想要一份c餐的外賣
I'd like to have Set C, take-away, please.

再给我多一次机会吧
Please give me one more chance.

妳參與過什麼類型的活動呀?

What kind of activities have you joined?

這價格已包含服務費?

Does the price include the service cost?

給我菜單

Please give me a menu.

你們有免費的飲品供應嗎?

Do you serve any free beverages?

什麼飲品是沒有酒精的呀?

What kind of beverages is does not contain alcohol?

給我多點?

Could you give me more?

我想要一份c餐的外賣

I want a C meal and it is a take-away.

再给我多一次机会吧
Please gives me again many opportunities.

妳參與過什麼類型的活動呀?
What type activity have you participated in?

這價格已包含服務費?
Has this price contained the service fee?

給我菜單
Please give me the meun

你們有免費的飲品供應嗎?
Do you have the free drinks supply?

什麼飲品是沒有酒精的呀?
What drinks don't have the ethyl alcohol?

給我多點?
You can give me many spots?

我想要一份c餐的外賣
I want a C meal going

再给我多一次机会吧

Please, give me a chance again Please give me another chance.


妳參與過什麼類型的活動呀?

What kind of activity have you joined? What kinds of activity did she join?


這價格已包含服務費?

Does the expense include a service cost? Does this price include service charge?


給我菜單

Please, give me a menu. Menu please.


你們有免費的飲品供應嗎?

Do you serve any free beverages? OK.

Do you have any free drinks?


什麼飲品是沒有酒精的呀?

What kind of beverages is non alcohol? What are the choices of non-alcholic beverages?


給我多點?

Could you give me more? OK.

May I have more?


我想要一份c餐的外賣

I want a C meal and take away.I want to have a Set C to go.