英文作文請睇下有否錯誤地方，thank alot

請睇下有否錯誤地方，thank alot

Question

You have finished undergraduate and are working in relation of your college subject. You now hope to take a graduate course in a university. Write to a professor for information.

Answer

Dear professor,

I am writing to you for information of working in relation of my college subject. I would like ask you some question, if you don’t mind.

As you know that I have finished undergraduate study. I am now looking for a job, nut I worry I can’t find out a good job, because I don’t know what kind of job suitable for me. It is first time that I am looking for a job. I have not working experience in the society.

First professor, pleases tell me what kind of job in relation of my college subject? As you know I have finished undergraduate study in business. What kind of job I can take? Second how to prepare for my interview? I don’t have interview experience. I feel stress of interview. The late question is that I want to take training course of my career in the future, but I am no idea. Please tell me which kind of training course is good for my career path.

I am very pressure for looking a job, please give me a opinion. Thank you, professor. I am looking for your reply as soon as possible.

Best wish
Tom