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In Japan there has a company call Nintendo. And [and is a conjunction linking two sentences, it is rarely that it will put at the beginning of a sentence.] it has invented a 3D 遊 戲機 which did not [past tense should not be used in this passage] wear any 3D glasses to see the Three-dimensional result [experience should be used] .In this video you can [will is better as your audiences should not have seen the video] see that you did not [past tense should not used as you are describing something that will happen – your audiences will see something] wear any 3D glasses ,you [you should not be used because you are not one of the characters inside the video] just move your hand turn left or turn right ,and you will see 遊戲入面的事物,甚至連一些細微的事物都可以看到. And this 遊 戲機 will call [should be named] 3DS .而 3DS將採用夏普的視差屏障 (parallax barrier)技術液晶屏,and also 3DS的顯示屏將不到4寸,小於4.2寸的DSi
LL。3DS將新配一根3D控制棒 , 而此款遊戲機亦將在下個月推出.
The Nintendo company in Japan has developed a three dimensional (3D) portable game system. With this game system, you will not need 3D glasses to get the 3D experience.
In this video, you will find that people are not wearing 3D glasses but are just waving their hands when playing the 3D games. You can also recognize every detail of the characters and objects on the screen of the game system.
This 3D game system will be named as 3DS. The LCD panel of the 3DS will adopt HP’s parallax barrier technology. The screen size of the 3DS will be less than 4”, which is smaller than the 4.2” screen of the DSi LL. The 3DS will also be equipped with a 3D control stick. It will be launched in the market next month.
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